Mostly, when the flame goes out the candle is left. Maybe, once upon, it flickered and burned bright. Its reflection casting life onto the screen as I write. Like the sun it shone wherever I was. Perhaps it had its own soul? Not a soul we humans understand. Of a beauty that mesmerized, it was so grand. Not a composition of science, oxygen and chemistry. A soul of burning mystery. And then I left it alone, ignored and forgot it. Or, I extinguished it with a thoughtless breath. Cruel, you could say. It was so motile and alive. Blue, transparent, deep orange, dark and light. Shaped like a hand, as if reaching out to somewhere — to a place we can’t see. An x-dinguished gesture axed the flame. The candle's journey abruptly finished. Were there conversations with the candle? Flaming or not? Dialog or monolog? Probably, but rarely. I told it my story and asked it to publish my wishes. I did, — but only in recent oratory. I put my hopes into the flame. Then I watched it write, with the tip of its light, onto the backdrop of the eternal night. I blew it out, letting the white smoke add its credentials and reshape the message to the essentials. Quickly I lit it again, so the flame could rise from the dead and proceed with the next message instead. My message was sent. Should I remain? Am I waiting in vain? Some of my candle is left, but what happened to its flame?
Mostly,
when the flame goes out
the candle is left.
Maybe, once upon, it flickered
and burned bright.
Its reflection casting life
onto the screen as I write.
Like the sun it shone wherever I was.
Perhaps it had its own soul?
Not a soul we humans understand.
Of a beauty that mesmerized,
it was so grand.
Not a composition of science,
oxygen and chemistry.
A soul of burning mystery.
And then I left it alone,
ignored and forgot it.
Or,
I extinguished it
with a thoughtless breath.
Cruel, you could say.
It was so motile and alive.
Blue, transparent, deep orange,
dark and light.
Shaped like a hand,
as if reaching out to somewhere —
to a place we can’t see.
An x-dinguished gesture axed the flame.
The candle's journey abruptly finished.
Were there conversations with the candle?
Flaming or not?
Dialog or monolog?
Probably, but rarely.
I told it my story
and asked it to publish my wishes.
I did, — but only in recent oratory.
I put my hopes into the flame.
Then I watched it write,
with the tip of its light,
onto the backdrop of the eternal night.
I blew it out,
letting the white smoke add its credentials
and reshape the message to the essentials.
Quickly I lit it again,
so the flame could rise from the dead
and proceed
with the next message instead.
My message was sent.
Should I remain?
Am I waiting in vain?
Some of my candle is left,
but what happened to
…from London and Umhlanga…brilliant
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Lovely poem!
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